English 895: Blog 5


Chang, Ching-Fen. “Peer Review via Three Modes in an EFL Writing 
     Course.” Computers and Composition 29.1 (2012): 63-78. Science 
     Direct. Web. 7 Jun. 2012.

Chang studied how three formats of peer review—face-to-face, asynchronous computer-mediated communication (CMC), and synchronous CMC—influenced the effectiveness of student peer review.  His results show that the affordances of these three modes affected student perceptions, engagement with tasks, and categories of comments regarding peer review.  He argues that combining all three modes at different stages in the writing process can maximize effectiveness for the most learners.

Early in his essay, Chang reviews literature on the purposes and benefits of peer review, which include Tsui & Ng’s argument that it enhances students’ sense of audience, improves their self-awareness of strengths and weaknesses, and fosters collaboration and ownership of students’ writing (63).  Some previous studies (Tuzi, Guardado, and Shi) have found that online peer feedback tends to focus more on local sentence-level issues when compared with F2F peer reviews, but that with asynchronous online feedback, students “tended to balance both positive and negative responses and provide specific suggestions for revision” (64).  When comparing F2F peer review with various CMC modes, some of the research is mixed, with some studies suggesting peer comments improve in CMC environments while others favor F2F (64).  In several studies, students reported mixed preferences for peer review in the different modes, perceiving different benefits from each (65).  Chang then goes on to pose three questions for his study relating to how students “engage in peer review tasks via the three modes,” what comments are generated from these modes, and how students “perceive the effectiveness of peer review via the three modes?” (65).  To answer these questions, he conducted the study in a college-level English writing course in Taiwan, using MSN instant messaging, Blackboard, and F2F meetings—one for each draft of a multiple draft assignment.  Chang describes in details the process followed for each draft using the different modes and how the session transcripts were coded afterward to define the results (66-68).  One interesting result of the study was that students tended to make more comments about local sentence-level issues in asynchronous CMC mode when compared with either F2F or synchronous CMC, with F2F generating the most global feedback, and students participated in more clarification-oriented exchanges in F2F than either CMC mode (69-70).  Students reported being more comfortable giving critical feedback with the CMC modes as opposed to F2F (72).  In the end, students reported conflicting perceptions of the different modes for peer review, but most of them said that a mix of the three modes helped them gain a variety of comments and accommodate different learning styles (73).  The study also revealed that peer reviewers emphasize different types of problems in each mode (74).

I found this article to be extremely useful since I have used both asynchronous online peer review through Blackboard and F2F peer reviews, and I intend to focus my conference paper on peer review in a hybrid course.  I had thought of doing this anyway, but this article has encouraged me to use a mixture of both asynchronous peer review and F2F in the same course.  If any writing teachers are interested in experimenting with different modes of peer review, then I would recommend reading this article.  I may even like to survey my students in the course about their experiences and add the results to my conference paper for a possible future conference presentation or publishing opportunity.

2 comments:

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  2. Jennifer - Thank you for reviewing this article; it came across my radar, but it was not one of the ones I eventually pursued hence my gratitude for your informative summary and comments. As a result of your recommendation, I've added it to my Diigo library for future reading.

    And I definitely want to read it to get to some of the details that you cannot get into with a short review. I'm particularly interested in whether he discussed how he implements peer review in his courses; in other words, how does he structure peer review (questions to answer, rubric, forms or letters, etc.) and what kind of preparation does he give students (models, demonstrations, etc.), for those factors can affect what kind of feedback students give.

    Your ideas for your own future work sound great. I hope to see the results someday!

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